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Post by LordofFlames on Aug 26, 2005 9:34:35 GMT -5
Kane turned around to Carne.
"It's Time my friend........"
Carne's eyes glowed red
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For those who could see it, probably everyone in the military camp outside the fortress, a large, dark, eerie cloud materialized over Kane's Fortress. Outside the fortress walls, something was rising from the ground. If you looked close with a sightscope, you'd see millions of human-looking creatures, looking like if they were made of darkness only. And that was close to the truth. The same black "mud" that had engulfed Kane was these creatures made of. If you'd just touch one of them a little, your mind, body and soul would be corrupted and your will would be controlled of the source of the darkness, in this case Kane.
Silently the dark creatures stood, waiting for mental orders from Kane.
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Jack observed the Dark Ones with his face fraught with terror. Then he felt a huge, dark presence behind him. He turned around.
"What are these creatures???" General Jack yelled
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Kane and Carne used their dark powers to teleport back into the fortress. Before them, General Jack stood. Jack turned around and yelled:
"What are these creatures???"
Kane got a sinister smile on his face.
"They're my children. They take only orders from me, and those I choose to control them. But if the one controlling them is not loyal to me, the creatures WILL make them loyal. And I'm not going to waste time to see how loyal you are Jack." Kane said
Jack looked at Kane terrified, then he turned around again, and screamed. The scream disappeared into the darkness of the creature.
Kane sinister smile became a mad smile, and his eyes glowed with madness also, and he laughed.
"ahahahah.... AHAHAHAHAHAHAAA!!!!!!"
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Post by poolplayer on Aug 26, 2005 19:32:36 GMT -5
deep down below the ground of planet ragol there something stirred.Since after Kane killed Wayne it has been lying dormant in the depths of the planet/ his essence is what Wayne was. Wayne was not really dawn and Joe's brother but only a half brother the mother he was born from, came from a long and forgotten race. that race was called the luminites. the luminites had the power of light and good on there side.this power is what made Wayne as strong as he was.soon he will come up and a great battle will begin.
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Joe"It;s about time we got it online. now that it is activated we will have a better chance at fighting Kane."
Dawn"you mean we were sent here with out knowing we would be able to defeat him."
Joe"Yes as high ranked as you were only me and the rulers of the empire knew this. we are the best int the empire if we cannot defeat Kane then the universe is doomed."
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Post by LordofFlames on Sept 8, 2005 5:37:25 GMT -5
"...Kane... what is it?" Carne asked. Kane opened his eyes. "Somethings awakening..... in the depths of the planet. And it's soul is bathing in.... light.... could it be them?" Kane said to himself. "Them? who are Them?" General Jack asked. Jack, now corrupted by the Dark Ones, looked like a half rotten white corpse. Kane turned to Jack.
"A race long gone, long forgotten, believed to be extinct. The most powerful creatures of light.... The Luminites. And what a coincidence that one is on this planet. Let me check this soul more closely..." Kane closed his eyes again and focused on the existence in the planet. Just for a second he could feel it, then the creature closed him out of his mind.
"Interesting....." Kane said. "Who is that luminite?" Carne and Jack asked in one voice.
Kane turned and looked towards the enemy camp.
"It's Wayne."
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Post by poolplayer on Sept 19, 2005 0:13:34 GMT -5
[hey sorry it took me so long to reply i been busy since school started]
With the newly restored power of the alien technology Joe and the others have been able to work on living quarters suitable for the crew to live in but now Joe paces wondering what happened to the invaders.
Joe"dawn"
dawn"yes"
Joe"come to my quarters i need to speak to you."
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dawn"what is it."
Joe"those people who rescued you and sent you back to us why did they leave."
dawn"they feared you and Kane would kill them, and did not want to be mixed up in your war."
Joe"hmmmm i wish they would come back we could really use there help now."
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Post by LordofFlames on Sept 19, 2005 2:00:52 GMT -5
"Well well.... this is gonna get interesting..." Kane said. He looked at the no-mans land where the two armies stood in formation. "This war is gonna be bloody and fun" Kane said with a maddened smile.
Carne and Jack stopped in the middle of sword practice. Jack just stood looking serious, but Carne got a smile also, not a maddened, but a smile that showed that he thirsted for blood.
"Well, Kane. The troops are in formation. Why are we waiting?" General Jack asked. "Because we don't need to attack yet..... we may not need to attack at all, it depends on that thing." Kane answered. "What thing?" Jack said.
Kane turned around, and gave Jack a mental image.
"Oh, I see...." Jack said.
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Post by poolplayer on Sept 19, 2005 15:37:46 GMT -5
radar operator"sir the alien radar just detected a huge energy spike."
Joe"can you tell its origins it may lead us to Kane."
R.O."no sir but it didn't come from the surface it came from the center of the planet."
Joe"what, can it be tracked?"
R.O."no sir it came and went within less then a microsecond."
Joe"alright listen up i want constant surveillance on the radar if it should happen again i want to be immediately notified whether I'm asleep or not."
R.O."yes sir"
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Joe now in his quarters paces wonder if it was not Kane what it could be.
Joe to himself"this is most troublesome as if i didn't have enough to worry about with Kane. hopefully the radar was malfunctioning, if not we may be in more trouble then we were when we landed."
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Post by LordofFlames on Sept 22, 2005 9:25:17 GMT -5
Kane opened his eyes, turned to Carne and said: "It's comming..... It's almost at the surface. Carne, prepare the Ritual Room! We're going to perform the Rite of the Underworld...."
Carne looked at Kane. "The Rite of the Underworld? You're going to summon the Champion of Hades?" Carne asked.
Kane smiled in such a way that even the most fearless creature could shake in fear.
"Yes....." Kane answered. "The Champion of Hades, the Ancient Knight of Darkness....... Azuzac. The Luminites most sworn ememy..."
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Post by poolplayer on Sept 22, 2005 16:56:49 GMT -5
[thinking archangel didn't get my hint]
R.O"sir theres just been a series of those powerful energy spikes."
Joe"what! not another one i was hoping it was an energy malfunction in the alien tech. but now I'm certain its real."
R.O."sir theres something else this time it was coming from close to the surface."
Joe"how close."
R.O."a few meters sir."
Joe"what on ragol could it be Wayne never reported anything but that black mud Kane got caught in. if its more of that stuff Kane got caught up in then we're......
all of a sudden Joe was cut off by a blinding light and a t=rumbling sound that seemed to shake the whole plater. then just as soon as it started it was gone.
Joe"what on this strange world was that."
R.O."sir the radars got blank again but we weren't able to do much except for figure that the reading went off the scale a the time of the light."
Joe"well try as best you can to find an estimante on the energy level."
R.O."yes sir."
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Post by LordofFlames on Sept 26, 2005 1:56:11 GMT -5
((Well, I don't think Grimm *Archangel* has been on my forum for awhile now ^^ But hopefully We'll see him soon ;]))
Dark energies swirled around the room, and a unholy figure took shape.
You have summoned me here Kane, Child of Darkness, and I, Knight of Darkness, Is to be your guardian from here on. Tell me you wishes Master
Kane smiled vicously. "Well well..... just in time, Wayne's reached the surface. Azuzac! Your sworn enemy has arisen again! I've summoned you for this! There is still a Luminite in this world!"
The dark figure put his hand on his swordhilt. Thank you Kane, Child of Darkness. I shall meet with this Luminite in a Ancient Duel, as we Dark Ones and the Bright Ones did in the Times of Old. Should I fall, be not worried. Here.... Azuzac threw a pendant to Kane.
If I fall.... Azuzac continued Then you will become the new Dark Knight. Fare thee well, Child of Darkness...
And with that, Azuzac dissapeard in a storming cloud of pure darkness.
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"Oh my. The entire planet might dissapear because of this. What do you think Zan?"
"Well, I don't know, it's your soulmate Yuki...."
On a large ship, built from strange technology, two persons stood in the shadows, talking.
Yuki looked down at the planet. "Kane.... if you use up all your energies, True Darkness will fall over you, and I think thats sad. I will help you if I can...... Zan"
The other person came forth to her. "Yes Mylady?"
Yuki sighed. "Prepare the EBAs (energeist battle armor). With the stealth component. We're going down there." Yuki said calmly.
Zan saluted. "Yes Mylady, I'll be off then." Zan left the room.
Yuki went back looking out of the window. "Kane.... don't fall to True Darkness..... don't leave me..."
((I thought this story was getting a little boring with the same persons all the time, so I improvised a new plot ^^))
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Post by poolplayer on Sept 26, 2005 12:51:08 GMT -5
[sounds good thats why i braught the luminite thing in and was hopung frumm woyld come back]
wayne shot up into the heavens(or at least what humans called heaven) but really t was the clouds for in the home world of the no longer existing luminites there is a portal to there world in theclouds that only a luminate can enter.
wayne"what is this power i thaught kane killed me.but for some reason im being drawn to the heavens like a magnet to another.it seems kane is still here though and looks like joe and the others came in as a second wave. but they shouldof known if i failed they would not be abl to succeed."
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Post by LordofFlames on Sept 27, 2005 4:26:03 GMT -5
Kane watched as the light shot away towards the sky in amazing speed. Kane smiled grimmly,.
"Welcome back Wayne....."
Then suddenly, a feeling came to him. And tears started to flow from his eyes. Kane held up his hands and looked at them, shivering, not from fear, but from remorse.
"W-w-what....? Who...? Where....? When....?"
Then suddenly Kane knew.
"Why? Why have you come here of all places? Why? You might get killed, and I don't want that..... Yuki...."
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Yuki wiped tears from her eyes.
"So Kane..... you know that I'm here... And the reason I'm here is because I still love you. I've loved you before, I love you now and I will love you 'til the end of my days. And You're falling to darkness, and I think that's sad....... Please Kane, sway from the path of darkness you've turned to!"
Yuki and Kane had a special kind of soulmate relationship. Kane was human, and Yuki was a elf. Such a bond they shared was impossible, until they bonded. When close, they could mentally talk to each other. But they didn't speak through their minds, the spoke through their hearts.
Yuki.... I..... I can't. This is the path I've chosen, and until someone stops me, I'm going to continue my walk on this path..... I'm sorry..... Kane said.
"It's okay Kane. In the end it wont matter. I'm going to fight you Kane, and if I loose, I'll choose your path to be with you, but if you loose to me, I hope you'll come back to the path of light. Good luck love." Yuki said, once again crying.
The same to you love..... may the most desperate of us win... hahaha.... Kane answered, trying to hide the tears of his heart.
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Post by poolplayer on Sept 27, 2005 20:33:21 GMT -5
Wayne suddenly appeared on his home planet. he had never been here or heard of it, but somehow he knew it was home. there was no laughter, no crying to angry voices, for he was the last of his kind. the dark ones had killed his people, his mother had been sent to earth the planet he had called home for so many years before his people were destroyed. somehow he knew where to go though. he went to a building that most people would call a church but to him it was a citadel. he went to the top floor of the decrepit building that had baganto crumble from disrepair of a 100 years. in a room he found the luman warriors armor. and adamant sword, armor and a diamond helm that is invisible to all but the luminites. the sword and the armor were made of the strongest and rarest metal in the universe, and only one of them was ever made. all the adamantium in the universe had been gathered to make these weapons.
Wayne"with these i will finally avenge my people whom i never knew anything of."
he walked into the warrior sanctums inner chamber. there he found a charm known as the lumanescent teardrop. it is what gave his people their power. now that he is the only one left, all the power went directly to him when he put it on. he then walked past the altar where the charm had been, and and looked at a tablet made of light. he closed his eyes and all the power and history of his people was sent directly into his mind.
Wayne"so this is how my people lived and were killed. i will avenge them not with hatred, but with love for my people and my world. no, for every world."
and then he went into a secret chamber that lead him to a ceremonial room. then he began a ritual to call his own beast but not of darkness, this is a beast of light its name is unpronounceable but to the people it was called lumite. it was an entity of pure light and it came forth from almost out of thin air.
lumite"so i have finally been awakened."
Wayne"yes it is i that called you."
"was it not the women who created me? your mother i believe it was."
Wayne"m-my mother, shes dead. has been since a long time ago. the dark one is back, he killed all the people in the past and is now back on ragol."
lumite"yes that is their home planet i believe."
Wayne"will you help me to defeat the dark one and Kane."
lumite"Kane?"
Wayne"yes he is the one who called the dark beast."
lumite "no, you are not ready. you are powerful, but there is a feeling of rage inside you. i will send you to a place where you may train yourself to use your powers better and defeat this rage inside you."
Wayne"thank you and you are right there is rage inside me. i accept this task."
with that Wayne was sent into a place he did not know of but guessed it was the place lumite spoke of.
//**LordofFlames here.... well sorry, I couldn't resist. I had hard time reading this text, so I took the freedom to fix the spellings and such. I hope you're not offended by this :s**\\
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Post by LordofFlames on Sept 28, 2005 1:51:07 GMT -5
(( Just thought i was going to tell you this, I've fixed 95% of spelling in each post on page 3, since i found a check spelling function. When a person has written his text, he can press alt+c. a Window will open, and show what they think is the correct word. A rather accurate dictionary if I may say so ^^ At least I'm going to use all the time after today xD. Oh and by the way, if we continue this, Unknown World 2 will continue forever. How do you say about an unknown world 3? Where i can write about Kane and Yuki and other neat stuff, and you can describe where Wayne is training and maybe more history of the luminites and such. What do you say? //LordofFlames ))
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Post by poolplayer on Sept 28, 2005 21:19:35 GMT -5
[no and actually i thank you because im a typo king and rarely go back tofix things and yeah we may want to run back waords a little and end number 2 there so we can start a third version where for the time being the war between kane and the emkpire stops and it goes into yuki and of course my trainng and learning more about the lumanites.]
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Post by Arcangel on Sept 29, 2005 23:31:09 GMT -5
[Personally, I think both ideas are fine. Haha, how have you guys been. I have been busy with work and school so I haven't been able to say hi to you guys. I will be back in the story soon.] ;D
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